NEXT CLASS · ILLUSTRATIVE
Basic Commands, week 1
Tue Nov 3 · 6:30 PM · 4 seats
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KEYSTONE PET PLACE
01 / KEYSTONE PET PLACE
The grooming book is full. Classes sign up by call or in the store. Cat rescue since 2013, dogs since 2016. The store earned the reputation — the website hasn’t caught up.
The original mark, background removed. Mount Joy, PA
02 / SITE AUDIT
Eight live pages reviewed October 31, 2026; the phone measurements cover five of them. The photography is real and the prices are published. What’s missing is the path from either one to a booking.
The homepage lays out at 980px on a phone. 22 of 128 text elements are set at 10px or smaller before the whole page is scaled down. On screen, that lands near 4px.
SOURCE · LIVE HOMEPAGE AT 390 PX, OCT 31 2026
The homepage starts at H2 and has no H1. The Events page is titled “Career Opportunites.” Search engines get a name and very little else.
SOURCE · DOM AUDIT, HOMEPAGE AND EVENTS PAGE
Across the five core pages there are 0 instances of “book,” “schedule,” “calendar,” “availability,” or “waitlist.” The paths end in a phone number or a store visit.
SOURCE · TEXT AUDIT, 5 CORE PAGES
“Not accepting new full groom clients” sits mid-page on an 8,921px page. It sends visitors to a phone call to join the cancellation list. There is no form.
SOURCE · /GROOMING
Training publishes $120, six weeks, ages 8 weeks and up, and a trainer with 40 years of experience. It publishes no class dates and no enrollment form. “Stop by Keystone Pet Place or give us a call with questions.”
SOURCE · /ABOUT-4 (DOG TRAINING)
The rescue started with cats in 2013 and added dogs in 2016. The live page lists one animal in running text, with a call-or-visit instruction.
SOURCE · /RESCUE-PETS
At 1440 the header hides three destinations behind “More.” Real capture.
03 / THE GAP
A Mount Joy pet parent decides tonight. They have a puppy, a free Saturday, and a phone. Here is the path Keystone offers — and the one it could.
Live site, /about-4. No class date, no seat count, no request.
Requests, not fake confirmations. The counter still confirms every seat.
“Stop by Keystone Pet Place or give us a call with questions or to register for an upcoming class.”
THE LIVE TRAINING PAGE · THE ONLY NEXT STEP
04 / THE FLAGSHIP
One concept, five jobs: retail hours, grooming capacity, class seats, the wash, and the rescue. The tabs are live. Dates and availability are illustrative; the build connects to the counter’s real system.
MOUNT JOY, PA · 100 W. MAIN ST.
Food and supplies, full-service grooming, self-serve wash, training, and rescue pets. All under one roof.
NEXT CLASS · ILLUSTRATIVE
Tue Nov 3 · 6:30 PM · 4 seats
GROOMING
The full-groom book is full. Ask to join the cancellation list.
ZOEY’S PET WASH
Two wash tubs. Cash, coin or card.
FULL-SERVICE GROOMING
Published prices, real add-ons, and a cancellation list that actually takes your name.
Prices from the live site, subject to coat and behavior. Rabies vaccination required.
PUPPY + ADULT DOG TRAINING
Select a Tuesday to see the session. Dates and seats illustrative; live build reads the real roster.
ZOEY’S PET WASH · SELF-SERVE
No price is shown in this concept. Confirm at the store before you come.
KEYSTONE PET RESCUE · 501(C)(3)
The rescue started with cats in 2013 and added dogs in 2016. Questions about any listed animal go to the Mount Joy store by call, email or visit.
05 / THE SYSTEM
Not a brochure with a booking button taped on. The site, the counter, and the search results describe the same business — and hand each other the next step.
Five service paths, real prices, real photos, readable at 390. The storefront photo does the trust work; the layout does the reading.
16.5px+ body on phone, 18–22px on laptop
One page per service: dog grooming, dog training, self-serve dog wash, rescue pets. Add LocalBusiness data that matches the published hours and address.
One page per service, one clear town
Grooming cancellation list, class seat requests, wash hours. Requests land at the counter — no fake confirmed appointments, no payment taken online.
Demand captured at 11:47 PM
The 84-paragraph grooming page becomes four service pages. The trainer’s 40 years becomes a credential block. The rescue gets a maintainable pet list.
Reusable blocks, not one long scroll
A counter QR that routes happy customers to the right profile. Real reviews only — no invented stars, no stock testimonial, no “best in Lancaster” badge.
Reviews collected where the tail wags
Monthly changes: new class sessions, seasonal retail, rescue stories, local search checks. One report, written for a store owner — not a dashboard.
A maintained site, not a launch and leave
THE OPERATING PRINCIPLE
One store. One voice. One next step.
Every page ends with a request, a call, or a visit — never a dead end. The counter still owns the relationship. The website just stops losing people before they reach it.
06 / THE PROOF
No invented case study, no borrowed logo. This is Keystone’s own training page, rebuilt with the same $120, the same six weeks, and the same trainer — at a size a phone can read.
Desktop layout at phone width. The offer is there; the reading isn’t.
DOG TRAINING · CONCEPT
NEXT SESSION · ILLUSTRATIVE
Tuesday, Nov 3 · 6:30 PM 4 of 8 seats · Mount JoySharon Baublitz · 40 years · positive reinforcement
This panel is HTML, not a screenshot.
Same price, same trainer, same six weeks. One readable next step.
The price, the six-week length, the age floor, the trainer, the store. Nothing about the offer is invented to make the redesign look better.
Type size, line length, a visible next session, and one request action. The counter still confirms every seat.
No conversion lift, no revenue figure, no “before/after” metric. This is a design comparison, not a performance study.
Every photo, price and name on this page comes from Keystone’s live site. The only invented details are the dates and seat counts, and they are labeled illustrative.
BEFORE: LIVE /ABOUT-4 AT 390×844, CAPTURED OCT 31 2026. AFTER: BRANDCORE CONCEPT, ILLUSTRATIVE DATES.
07 / THE ROADMAP
A proposed sequence, not a promise. The clock starts when the counter can give us the assets and one decision-maker.
Launch day is proposed for day 14, assuming access and approvals in the first week. No dependency on a new POS or a new phone system.
08 / THE ENGAGEMENT
Scope is specific. The number isn’t on this page — a fixed-fee quote follows a 20-minute scope call, because the real variable is how much of the grooming and class workflow you want connected.
01 · THE FRONT DOOR
For a store that needs the phone version to stop costing it customers.
Fixed-fee quote after scope call.
RECOMMENDED
02 · THE BOOKING ENGINE
For the grooming list and the class roster — the two places demand already exists.
Fixed-fee quote after scope call.
03 · THE GROWTH PARTNER
For a store that wants the site to move with the seasons, the classes, and the rescue.
Monthly scope, fixed fee after call.
No prices, packages, or guarantees are invented on this page. Scope is agreed before any number is quoted.
Access, real photos, price and hours approval, one reviewer.
No fake reviews, no invented guarantees, no automatic bookings.
A 20-minute scope call, then a fixed-fee quote.
09 / LET’S TALK
I’d walk the store with you, then show you the phone version on your own counter. Twenty minutes is enough to scope it.
Amy Alfaro
Lead Sales & Strategy · Brandcore.io
“Keystone already does the hard part — people trust the store. Let’s make the website as easy to trust as the counter.”
BRANDCORE.IO · SAN FRANCISCO BAY AREA SALES SOLUTIONS
INDEX / KEYSTONE PET PLACE
Private proposal prepared by Brandcore.io · San Francisco Bay Area Sales Solutions · October 2026